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rG170a7f2ec185: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions
rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions
Summary

Remove spurious ".Ar groupname".
Add missing full stops.
While there, tweak word order for better grammar.

MFC after: 3 days

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man and check output.

mandoc -T lint and check the changed area has no warnings.

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pauamma_chezdork.com created this revision.May 5 2024, 12:02 AM
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pauamma_chezdork.com requested review of this revision.May 5 2024, 12:02 AM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B57586: Diff 138144.May 5 2024, 12:03 AM
ziaee accepted this revision as: ziaee.May 5 2024, 12:43 AM
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ziaee added inline comments.
sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.May 5 2024, 12:43 AM
pauamma_chezdork.com added a reviewer: Doc Committers.May 12 2024, 5:54 PM
pauamma_chezdork.com retitled this revision from Wordsmith -G and -g descriptions to ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.May 13 2024, 12:00 PM
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pauamma_chezdork.com added reviewers: allanjude, bjk.May 29 2024, 9:34 PM
allanjude accepted this revision as: allanjude.Jun 6 2024, 4:04 PM

Looks good, just the SPDX and the date need fixing.

sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
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The date will need to be bumped as well

pauamma_chezdork.com updated this revision to Diff 139598.Jun 6 2024, 8:25 PM
  • Change per concussious' request (which I completely missed)
  • s/previous/earlier/ (instance I missed)
  • bump .Dd
This revision now requires review to proceed.Jun 6 2024, 8:25 PM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B58093: Diff 139598.Jun 6 2024, 8:25 PM
pauamma_chezdork.com marked 2 inline comments as done.Jun 6 2024, 8:29 PM

Thanks to @imp for reminding me in IRC of the change request I missed.

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jun 6 2024, 9:52 PM
Closed by commit rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions (authored by pauamma_chezdork.com, committed by imp). · Explain Why
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imp added a commit: rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.
imp added a commit: rG170a7f2ec185: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.Jun 12 2024, 9:55 PM

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