ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions
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Authored by pauamma_gundo.com on May 5 2024, 12:02 AM.

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rG170a7f2ec185: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions
rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions

Summary

Remove spurious ".Ar groupname".
Add missing full stops.
While there, tweak word order for better grammar.

MFC after: 3 days

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man and check output.

mandoc -T lint and check the changed area has no warnings.

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rG FreeBSD src repository

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pauamma_gundo.com created this revision.May 5 2024, 12:02 AM

Herald added a subscriber: imp. · View Herald TranscriptMay 5 2024, 12:02 AM

pauamma_gundo.com requested review of this revision.May 5 2024, 12:02 AM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B57586: Diff 138144.May 5 2024, 12:03 AM

concussious.bugzilla_runbox.com accepted this revision as: concussious.bugzilla_runbox.com.May 5 2024, 12:43 AM

concussious.bugzilla_runbox.com added a subscriber: concussious.bugzilla_runbox.com.

concussious.bugzilla_runbox.com added inline comments.

sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.May 5 2024, 12:43 AM

pauamma_gundo.com added a reviewer: Doc Committers.May 12 2024, 5:54 PM

pauamma_gundo.com retitled this revision from Wordsmith -G and -g descriptions to ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.May 13 2024, 12:00 PM

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pauamma_gundo.com added reviewers: allanjude, bjk.May 29 2024, 9:34 PM

Looks good, just the SPDX and the date need fixing.

sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
31	The date will need to be bumped as well

Change per concussious' request (which I completely missed)
s/previous/earlier/ (instance I missed)
bump .Dd

This revision now requires review to proceed.Jun 6 2024, 8:25 PM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B58093: Diff 139598.Jun 6 2024, 8:25 PM

Thanks to @imp for reminding me in IRC of the change request I missed.

This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jun 6 2024, 9:52 PM

Closed by commit rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions (authored by pauamma_gundo.com, committed by imp). · Explain Why

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imp added a commit: rG21faf821a304: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.

imp added a commit: rG170a7f2ec185: ifconfig(8): wordsmith -G and -g descriptions.Jun 12 2024, 9:55 PM

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