People, thanks for your patience. I had to learn a few more things before attempting the commit.

PR https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-doc/pull/105 closed, without deleting the events branch in my fork.

Side note, for Deb Goodkin (present in the most recent replay):

Two commits to the PR:

Can anyone suggest a working anchor?

Today's three commits under https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports/pull/140/commits.

Trailing white spaces removed.

Looking ahead: consider having a release date near the head of release notes for 13.2.

Abandon?

I forgot to list @dvl and @thj as reviewers – sorry!

News: text for www.langille.org

News: BSD Now: edition discussed with Tom Jones

Approved by: delphij (doc)

5 December 2022, in that order, because both tables under https://www.freebsd.org/releases/12.4R/relnotes/#security-errata present dates in that way.

Thank you,

AsciiDoc Language Documentation at Asciidoctor Docs – https://docs.asciidoctor.org/asciidoc/latest/ – is definitive, and clear.

My usual mistake: whitespace errors. Corrected prior to a9f81805c39b8a6e0ec6e87ce6d7151764ea850c at:

ISO® as the sole point of reference.

Not TrueOS.

Round two.

12.4 release notes: date: month, comma day year

Comment https://reviews.freebsd.org/D37528#inline-230337: done.

Simplicity: let's abandon this.

Orientation (since inline comments have become misplaced):

Whilst here, I noticed:

grahamperrin marked 2 inline comments as done.

Changes are visible at https://docs.freebsd.org/en/. (Compare with e.g. https://web.archive.org/web/20221021070131/https://docs.freebsd.org/en/.)

An additional example: the apostrophe in owner's manual – https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Owner's_manual.

In D37503#852614, @pauamma wrote:

Test plan looks like it has text intended for summary?

From today's https://github.com/grahamperrin/freebsd-doc/commit/8c2db4e0e1fa15f332b0247b984972016be71f4f on branch releng/12.4 in my fork, I used GitHub to produce a new diff:

The originally approved diff https://reviews.freebsd.org/file/data/d44efk4yvbliysh73l6f/PHID-FILE-gnvy2yjbbphvrre3hwbi/D37369.diff became non-applicable

Related: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=267464

Can https://reviews.freebsd.org/D37322#inline-229538 be marked as done?

Note present under https://www.freebsd.org/releases/12.4R/relnotes/#kernel-general.