drm-kmod: package description: correct and update

[• grahamperrin]

Summary

drm-kmod: package description: correct and update by grahamperrin · Pull Request #140 · freebsd/freebsd-ports

Correct a typo (given, not give).

Whilst here: aim to make the description more understandable to readers who may be new to, or relatively unfamiliar, with things such as DRM. In particular:

• make clearer that modules are in a separate port (not this metaport).

Contexts include:

• https://www.freshports.org/graphics/drm-kmod/#description
• https://www.freebsd.org/cgi/ports.cgi?query=drm-kmod&stype=all ▶Description
• …

Origin of diff 114131 a.k.a. Diff 3:

• https://patch-diff.githubusercontent.com/raw/freebsd/freebsd-ports/pull/140.diff.

Test Plan

Preview in GitHub:

• https://github.com/grahamperrin/freebsd-ports/blob/patch-1/graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr.

[• grahamperrin]

This comment was removed by • grahamperrin.

[lwhsu]

There are trailing white spaces in almost end of every line.

[• grahamperrin]

Trailing white spaces removed.

(Inclusion will be a very hard habit to break. Sorry.)

[tcberner]

graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr

2–4

^ I think the stuff in parentheses might make it more wordy than required.

[manu]

graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr

3

I don't understand this part, "from the former base DRM component ..." ?

6

That's implied with how dev works everywhere and not needed here.

[• grahamperrin]

graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr

2–4

Removed, with an additional thought.

3

Re: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports/pull/140/commits/3d42c2d313ad7614e24ea4d8f0ac8e73a3de4790#r1045205350 I found the original paragraph (as a whole) difficult to understand.

How does https://github.com/grahamperrin/freebsd-ports/blob/patch-1/graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr look now?

6

Removed.

[• grahamperrin]

Today's three commits under https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports/pull/140/commits.

Conversation https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-ports/pull/140#pullrequestreview-1212668502 resolved.