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Authored by grahamperrin on Dec 11 2022, 9:38 AM.
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drm-kmod: package description: correct and update by grahamperrin · Pull Request #140 · freebsd/freebsd-ports

Correct a typo (given, not give).

Whilst here: aim to make the description more understandable to readers who may be new to, or relatively unfamiliar, with things such as DRM. In particular:

  • make clearer that modules are in a separate port (not this metaport).

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Origin of diff 114131 a.k.a. Diff 3:

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grahamperrin created this revision.
lwhsu requested changes to this revision.Dec 13 2022, 12:33 AM
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There are trailing white spaces in almost end of every line.

This revision now requires changes to proceed.Dec 13 2022, 12:33 AM

Trailing white spaces removed.

(Inclusion will be a very hard habit to break. Sorry.)

tcberner added inline comments.
graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr
2–4

^ I think the stuff in parentheses might make it more wordy than required.

manu added inline comments.
graphics/drm-kmod/pkg-descr
3

I don't understand this part, "from the former base DRM component ..." ?

6

That's implied with how dev works everywhere and not needed here.