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Sat, Apr 27
Thanks for the feedback. I've merged all suggested changes and also
Fri, Apr 26
Chris, rather than overwrite your review, I rebased your work on top of the latest of the main branch and created new review in https://reviews.freebsd.org/D44977. The commit message is based on your summary in D43940. If everything looks good to you there, I'll commit.
Would it be possible to update the patch so it applies in recent current?
There were some changes in the manual page on February.
Thu, Apr 25
Fixed line breaks. Thanks for the feedback!
Wed, Apr 17
Tue, Apr 16
Mar 30 2024
Mar 18 2024
I'll commit now and incorporate @pauamma_gundo.com's suggestion.
Mar 17 2024
Mar 16 2024
Hi Joe, thanks for the feedback. You're right, those changes look pretty arbitrary by just looking at them!
Adding additional notes on the reasoning behind them.
Thanks for spotting those. I really need to run a spellcheck before I submit things. Apologies for the extra round.
Added additional typo and comma fixes and improvements for brevity.
Mar 15 2024
I committed these in two separate commits.
Hi Chris,
Mar 13 2024
A few typos remain, but getting close, I think.
Mar 11 2024
Mar 8 2024
Updated after feedback. Thanks for the great inputs!
Mar 3 2024
Bunch of small things I spotted.
Feb 27 2024
Restructured into a bullet point list; certainly better to read - hope the content is correct though.
Valid point on ARM - I've added a suggestion on ARM though I ain't an expert on the topic.
I got those infos from here: https://cgit.freebsd.org/src/commit/?id=47e073941f4e
Thanks for the feedback!
thanks for the feedback!
Feb 26 2024
Feb 25 2024
Feb 23 2024
Added command line example for minimum configuration on VLANs.
Feb 22 2024
Looks good. I'll commit with this log message unless there are objections.
Feb 20 2024
(I don't know how to render the handbook but) the text in this change solves my concerns.
Thanks to all of you for moving this along so swiftly! I've already started working on the next iteration. Will post that soon.
Thanks again!
Feb 18 2024
Corrected line break.