I'll commit now and incorporate @pauamma_gundo.com's suggestion.

Hi Joe, thanks for the feedback. You're right, those changes look pretty arbitrary by just looking at them!
Adding additional notes on the reasoning behind them.

Thanks for spotting those. I really need to run a spellcheck before I submit things. Apologies for the extra round.
Added additional typo and comma fixes and improvements for brevity.

I committed these in two separate commits.

Hi Chris,

A few typos remain, but getting close, I think.

Updated after feedback. Thanks for the great inputs!

Bunch of small things I spotted.

Restructured into a bullet point list; certainly better to read - hope the content is correct though.

Valid point on ARM - I've added a suggestion on ARM though I ain't an expert on the topic.
I got those infos from here: https://cgit.freebsd.org/src/commit/?id=47e073941f4e

Thanks for the feedback!

thanks for the feedback!

Added command line example for minimum configuration on VLANs.

Looks good. I'll commit with this log message unless there are objections.

(I don't know how to render the handbook but) the text in this change solves my concerns.

Thanks to all of you for moving this along so swiftly! I've already started working on the next iteration. Will post that soon.

Thanks again!

Corrected line break.

Correcting section reference to Sx instead of Cm.

Newbie mistake... diffed the wrong way. Updating to diff against main the right way.

Removed FreeBSD <=9 documentation; this also leaked into advanced-networking, because there is a whole section on FreeBSD 9 CARP. I took the liberty to remove that as well.

Your approach of creating something here that is easier to review and referencing it in Bugzilla makes sense. There have been some recent investigations into switching our tooling to something that incorporates bug reports and reviews in one place.

Combining Ed's and Rod's feedback on processors: removing controversial paragraph on Intel architecture

I asked some doc committers on IRC to have a look.

• Updated paragraph on CPU architecture to reference Nehalem instead.
• Added --usage reference for vmstart.sh
• Fixed disconnect key sequence for cu

Its getting much better, probably with pushing a commit soon.

Included the relevant feedback points into this latest update. Thanks for the great inputs. Any further inputs/feedback welcome!

And finally condensed the processor feature constraints into a simpler and shorter statement.

Included additional updates after Rod's feedback. Thanks for the inputs!

Sorry, just realized I missed the -U99999; included this now.

Updates after initial feedback - also fixed version of ISO files in the command line listings.

Oh, one other comment - when you regenerate the new patch please use -U999999 to get full context - Phabricator will then allow the reader to expand the blocks in between what's been changed.

Just some nits.

Thanks for the great feedback. I'll update the patch accordingly.

I have removed myself from the reviewers, since I guess I was added automatically because of a misfire on status reports.

To committers: if you want to commit this before me find time on this, please don't forget asking clusteradm/wwwadm to create where/ -> download/ redirection first!

Thanks. These are nice updates. I added a few mostly nit-picky comments and added a few other reviewers.

Agreed, it is redundant.

In D43550#993572, @minsoochoo0122_proton.me wrote:

Hugo Documentation: Alias

/website/content/en/download.adoc.toml

aliases = ['where.adoc']

But this doesn't work. Did I misunderstand the documentation?

In D43548#993576, @pauamma_gundo.com wrote:

Not sure what you mean by "unrelated to the content", but this is the output of the command above with kern.securelevel having its initial value.

Not sure what you mean by "unrelated to the content", but this is the output of the command above with kern.securelevel having its initial value.

Hugo Documentation: Alias

Restore unintended changes

LGTM too, but I'm no longer a doc committer.

Looks good, I can approve for releng; someone from docs should approve, though, and commit if necessary.

Please be careful with mechanical sweeping change.

Removed changes in release and status

I feel that we don't need to modify the old release or reports, we can just have a redirection from /where to /download (actually we should do this for every URL change.)

bootonly fits in CD

Thank you for your work!