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There is a lot of redundancy in the "The function returns" sentences, which could be shortened by saying just "Returns" or rearranging some in a different order, like "Zero is returned..."
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Oh, and as far as the use of "you", we do have specific guidelines to avoid it: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html
Is there a separate review to edit the Handbook and other documents that refer to floppies? In the Handbook alone, there are mentions in the Basics, Disks, and kernelconfig chapters. In the FAQ, too.
We really need a better way to handle this. Perhaps a list of entities for supported releases, then during a build, concatenate them into an entity that can be used directly in the DocBook source. Then we can get away from this FIFO, or, more accurately, "it is really hard to change these" changes.
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Please remember to update .Dd on commit. Thanks!
Nov 17 2017
Please remember to update .Dd in hier.7 and style.9.
In the future, please use full context in review diffs: https://wiki.freebsd.org/action/show/Phabricator?action=show&redirect=CodeReview#Create_a_Revision_via_Web_Interface
Remember that .Dd needs to updated on commit.
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Man page changes look good to me. Please remember to bump .Dd. Thanks!
Suggestions for improvements:
One comment, but looks good otherwise. Thanks!
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Added my probably-weak mdoc suggestions, and added brueffer as a reviewer.
Man page changes look fine to me.
Did you test VirtualBox USB pass-through? I was under the impression that it did not work at all any more.
Aug 24 2017
This is a bit confusing. The new -I and -X options take the same irq argument as the old -x?
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The href looks wrong (please see https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup-links.html), but the idea is good. Making the "supported releases" into a link also would be nice, if possible.
Jul 14 2017
Thank you. Please check with igor and mandoc -Tlint before commit.
Man page changes LGTM.