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2218 | beginning | |
2218 | This section doesn't seem to document setting origins, unfortunately. I can see that you're reusing text from another section though, so probably a bit harsh to reject this on that basis - unless you want to fix that at the same time, I'll take a separate PR to fix that. |
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2218 | Earlier feedback had me take it out |
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2218 | I may be doing something wrong, but I still see it when I download the diff. |
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2218 | I had the whole origin / fetch stuff in as commands and I took it out. |
I do think the origin setting stuff should be in #keeping_current link instead... and I'd prefer to improve that async to this review.
Yeah, happy with that.
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2218 | Ah, I see. |
Believe me, I'm no more fond of it than you, but The Style is The Style, if you'll permit me to be tautological. :)
The content looks good to me, just some minor nits.
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2212 | I'm wondering if we need to use "GitHub" instead of github... | |
2214 | have them be committed => have them committed? | |
2218 | Similarly, we should probably settle git vs Git across the doc. | |
2219 | setup => set up? | |
2232 | This line sounds a bit confusing to me from a reader's perspective - [what] can also work, without conflict [against what], when there are [?]. Perhaps breaking into two sentences and rephrasing it? | |
2251 | IMO the first comma is not needed | |
2257 | with? Also, should we avoid the word "merge" here? Since IMO it means continue/finish the rebase here. |
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2212 | We don't currently, and such a change would be beyond the scope of this change. | |
2214 | -> "and have them pushed into the FreeBSD's tree from there." | |
2218 | I tried to do that in the draft docs before we landed them into the tree, so I'll do this here. | |
2219 | Or omit it entirely. | |
2232 | Will give it a shot. | |
2251 | sure | |
2257 | reworded. |
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2257 | Do we need to/encourage reviewing the diff again after fast-forwarding? IMO it's fine 99.9% of the time but... (question mark) | |
2258 | Huh... What does this mean ;) | |
2263 | If we are closing the PR on the web interface anyways (as the above sentence stated), why does "requiring an account" depend on HTTPS or not? |
Thanks for making all the changes! This looks good to me, pending other reviewers' approvals.
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2263 | You can do all the steps of fetching the changes, preparing them for commit and pushing them into the FreeBSD w/o a github account. Is there a better way to say that? |