PR: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=202702
Original Submitted By: Mason Loring Bliss <mason@blisses.org>
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| sys/boot/forth/loader.conf.5 | ||
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| 26 | Remember to update this. | |
| 135 | Needs a comma after "option", but saying "without this option" is kind of confusing anyway. Delay prompting for the GELI passphrase until the loader menu is shown.``` (Is it really when the loader menu is shown, or just before?) ```The default behavior without this option is to prompt for the GELI passphrase just This could be reversed: explain the default behavior first, then say that this option can be added so the prompt is displayed later. | |
| sys/boot/forth/loader.conf.5 | ||
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| 33 | The | |
| 35 | file contains settings for bootstrapping the system. | |
| 36 | Delete. | |
| 37 | Settings in this file can specify the kernel to be booted, parameters to be passed to | |
| 38 | the kernel, and additional modules to be loaded. Most variables described in .Xr loader 8 can also be set here.`` | |
| 39 | Delete. | |
| 40 | Delete. | |
| 42 | The | |
| 44 | file must contain these two lines for | |
| 51 | If | |
| 53 | does not exist at installworld time, one with the above lines will be installed. | |
| 63 | Break sentence: behavior of some settings is defined by the setting's suffix. | |
| 64 | s/the/The/ | |
| 71 | s/will mark/marks/ | |
| 76 | s/the following/this/ | |
| 94 | s/executes/execute/ | |
| 104 | s/Defines/Define/ | |
| 116 | s/boot/the boot/ | |
| 120 | If a password is set, the boot menu will not appear until a key is pressed during | |
| 121 | the countdown period specified by the | |
| 123 | variable or the | |
| 126 | In both cases, the user must provide the password to be able to access the boot | |
| 129 | s/Provides/Set/ | |
| 132 | If a password is set, the user must enter the password to boot. | |
| 149 | s/Defines/Define/ | |
| 151 | s/Defines/Define/ | |
| 178 | s/of them// | |
| 197 | s/Sets/Set/ | |
| 199 | s/use/use,/ | |
| 200 | "setting" is probably not needed here. | |
| 204 | s/selects/selects the/ | |
| 212 | s/with/with a/ | |
| 226 | s/will load/load/ | |
| 232 | s/will load/load/ | |
| 238 | s/will be/is/ | |
| 243 | s/will be/is/ | |
| 247 | s/Selects/Select/ | |
| 259 | s/will be/is/ | |
| 266 | s/will not/is not/ | |
| 308 | booting a particular system (such as | |