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- rD54017: Document USES=cabal and its knobs.
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I found a few things, but having this in the porters handbook is good.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1336 | The indentation here is wrong. The <sect2 needs to be aligned below the </sect2> above (with an empty line in between). | |
| 1342 | I think the space here before the / is not necessary. | |
| 1374 | Is the / here before the </screen> really part of the output? | |
| 1394 | avoid the use of "we". Instead, simply write: "Once done, a list of files required dependencies can be generated:" | |
| 1403 | You can enclose the .cabal in <filename> tags. | |
| 1406 | Remove the "we can" here: "..., run the following command:" | |
| 1414 | Enclose the _ in <literal> tags. | |
| 7214 | This seems like to break the line too early. You can fill it up until 70 - 75 characters per line. | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml | ||
| 256 | s/provides following/provides the following/ | |
| 265 | Enclose them in <literal> or <varname> tags and put the 0.1.2 in <replaceable> tags. | |
| 267 | wrap the _ in <literal> and put a "the" before it: "the _ symbol." | |
| 277 | program is superfluous, as the <command> tags show what it is. | |
| 277 | s/during configuring/during the configuring/ | |
| 323 | superfluous option (change the <literal> to <option> to make it clear). | |
Bump.
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1374 | Yes, it is. I can remove it, if it gets in the way. | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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| 1341 | How about s/define/defines ? | |