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I found a few things, but having this in the porters handbook is good.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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1336 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | The indentation here is wrong. The <sect2 needs to be aligned below the </sect2> above (with an empty line in between). |
1342 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | I think the space here before the / is not necessary. |
1374 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | Is the / here before the </screen> really part of the output? |
1394 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | avoid the use of "we". Instead, simply write: "Once done, a list of files required dependencies can be generated:" |
1403 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | You can enclose the .cabal in <filename> tags. |
1406 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | Remove the "we can" here: "..., run the following command:" |
1414 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | Enclose the _ in <literal> tags. |
7213 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | This seems like to break the line too early. You can fill it up until 70 - 75 characters per line. |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml | ||
256 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | s/provides following/provides the following/ |
265 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | Enclose them in <literal> or <varname> tags and put the 0.1.2 in <replaceable> tags. |
267 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | wrap the _ in <literal> and put a "the" before it: "the _ symbol." |
277 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | program is superfluous, as the <command> tags show what it is. |
277 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | s/during configuring/during the configuring/ |
323 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | superfluous option (change the <literal> to <option> to make it clear). |
Bump.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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1374 ↗ | (On Diff #68756) | Yes, it is. I can remove it, if it gets in the way. |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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1341 ↗ | (On Diff #68791) | How about s/define/defines ? |