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PR: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=202702
Original Submitted By: Mason Loring Bliss <mason@blisses.org>

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sys/boot/forth/loader.conf.5
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Remember to update this.

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Needs a comma after "option", but saying "without this option" is kind of confusing anyway.

Delay prompting for the GELI passphrase until the loader menu is shown.```  (Is it really when the loader menu is shown, or just before?)

```The default behavior without this option is to prompt for the GELI passphrase just

This could be reversed: explain the default behavior first, then say that this option can be added so the prompt is displayed later.

sys/boot/forth/loader.conf.5
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The
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file contains settings for bootstrapping the system.
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Delete.

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Settings in this file can specify the kernel to be booted, parameters to be passed to
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the kernel, and additional modules to be loaded.
Most variables described in
.Xr loader 8
can also be set here.``
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Delete.

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Delete.

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The
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file must contain these two lines for
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If
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does not exist at installworld time, one with the above lines will be installed.
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Break sentence:

behavior of some settings is defined by the setting's suffix.
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s/the/The/

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s/will mark/marks/

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s/the following/this/

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s/executes/execute/

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s/Defines/Define/

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s/boot/the boot/
s/interrupting/interrupting the/

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If a password is set, the boot menu will not appear until a key is pressed during
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the countdown period specified by the
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variable or the
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In both cases, the user must provide the password to be able to access the boot
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s/Provides/Set/

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If a password is set, the user must enter the password to boot.
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s/Defines/Define/

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s/Defines/Define/

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s/of them//

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s/Sets/Set/

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s/use/use,/

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"setting" is probably not needed here.

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s/selects/selects the/

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s/with/with a/

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s/will load/load/

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s/will load/load/

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s/will be/is/
s/higher/with higher than/

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s/will be/is/

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s/Selects/Select/

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s/will be/is/

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s/will not/is not/

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booting a particular system (such as