The category itself was added to the ports framework in r555738.
While there, fix a typo.
PR: 248403
Differential D27340
Add "education" virtual category to Porter's Handbook. pauamma_gundo.com on Nov 23 2020, 2:23 PM. Authored by Tags None Referenced Files
Details The category itself was added to the ports framework in r555738. While there, fix a typo. PR: 248403 Tested with lynx. Checked that igor doesn't complain about this specific area.
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Event TimelineComment Actions The "Any of:" part doesn't feel right to me, because it's restrictive. Can you maybe flip it around? "Applications, utilities, or games primarily[...] or study in general, such as: course-writing or course-delivery applications[...]". Something like that gives context and hints as to what belongs without restricting its ability to grow over time. Comment Actions Hmm. You're right that "any of" feels restrictive, but "foo such as bar", to me, implies that bar is a subset of foo, which isn't the case here. How about just changing "Any of:" to "Such as:" before the inline list? Comment Actions Well, the category is restrictive, so it feels like ok to me, but turning the sentence around, and maybe chopping it into smaller sentences would be nice, maybe:
Comment Actions "Any of" felt okay to me, but I like this one better since they are now complete and smaller sentences. |