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A few man page corrections. textproc/igor is your friend (besides me, of course. ;-))

BTW, I like your "introduction to the nvlist" on your blog.

lib/libcasper/libcasper/libcasper_service.3
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s/services/service/

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s/name/the name/

Which name, the name of the process? Specifying that would make it more clear to the reader what "name" refers to.

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"a new limit"
or
"the new limits?"

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s/there/the/

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Insert a "the" before "command".

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Same here, see above about plural/singular limit(s).

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Superfluous space before sentence stop.

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"... from the process it was spawned from."

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See previous comment.

oshogbo marked 9 inline comments as done.

Thank you @bcr !
I don't think I would write any man page without you!

I hope the nvlist blog post was helpful for you! I should write some more...

Sorry for the wait. Looks good to me now.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jun 23 2018, 12:59 PM
This revision was automatically updated to reflect the committed changes.