Update the features list to something that better fits the current century.
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- rD51889: Update the features list to something that better fits the current century.
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A few small suggestions.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml | ||
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81 | Who is "we"? | |
112–116 | I would use "OpenZFS" here, to make it clear that it is not Oracle's ZFS implementation we are spporting. | |
144 | s/uses single/uses a single/ | |
176 | s/in/into/ |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml | ||
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80–86 | Maybe the word 'complete' is better than 'full-fledged' | |
117 | <emphasis>Fully integrated ZFS support</emphasis>, including root-on-ZFS, ZFS Boot Environments, fault management, administrative delegation, support for jails, &os; specific documentation, and system installer support. | |
138 | maybe just 'kernel APIs', since it covers more than just drivers, and we are mentioning drivers later in the sentence | |
150 | <emphasis>Simple, consistent repository structure and build system</emphasis> - &os; uses a single repository for all of its components, both kernel and userspace. This, along with an unified and easy to customize build system and a well thought out development process makes it easy to integrate &os; with build infrastructure for your own product. | |
176 | /in extending/into extending/ |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml | ||
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138 | I'm not sure about this one. "Kernel API" can mean the API that the kernel provides to the userspace; "kernel driver API" makes it very obvious that it's about the API for stuff that runs inside the kernel. |
Thank you for fixing up this document, it really needed it.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml | ||
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138 | ok |