iscsi(4)

[allanjude]

Summary

Add iscsi(4) manual page.

[allanjude]

share/man/man4/iscsi.4

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This is the same variable as above, is it supposed to be different? should this be iscsid_timeout ?

I don't see login_timeout documented either

[allanjude]

Proposed improvements: https://reviews.freebsd.org/differential/diff/1403/

[allanjude]

Taking over this differential to add my changes

[allanjude]

Add missing sysctls
Improve language
Improve description

[bcr]

I've found a typo. \o/

share/man/man4/iscsi.4

51

connecTs

[wblock]

share/man/man4/iscsi.4

35

s/your/the/

70

"Specify" is unnecessary in this entry and the following ones.

89

US spelling: behavior

"gets dropped" is weird. Suggestion: "...has been dropped due to network problems."

91

Active, not passive: s/will cause/causes/

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s/default/default,/

Break the compound sentence into simpler individual sentences:
By default, the device nodes are left intact. While the connection is down, all input/output operations are suspended, to be retried after the connection is reestablished.

[allanjude]

Update man page with fixes from bcr@ and wblock@ as well as other minor improvements

[allanjude]

Update the two other man pages to include the newer date
Also corrected a contraction and improve the sentence

[allanjude]

Update all files

[allanjude]

Fix a typo

[wblock]

usr.sbin/iscsid/iscsid.8

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Typo: "that is needs". Rearrange: All needed information is supplied by the kernel.

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s/damon/daemon/

[allanjude]

Final update

[allanjude]

Minor updates to the Author text

[allanjude]

Committed as rS271543