Update the features list to something that better fits the current century.
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- rD51889: Update the features list to something that better fits the current century.
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A few small suggestions.
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| 81 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | Who is "we"? |
| 112 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | I would use "OpenZFS" here, to make it clear that it is not Oracle's ZFS implementation we are spporting. |
| 142 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | s/uses single/uses a single/ |
| 174 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | s/in/into/ |
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| 80 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | Maybe the word 'complete' is better than 'full-fledged' |
| 115 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | <emphasis>Fully integrated ZFS support</emphasis>, including root-on-ZFS, ZFS Boot Environments, fault management, administrative delegation, support for jails, &os; specific documentation, and system installer support. |
| 136 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | maybe just 'kernel APIs', since it covers more than just drivers, and we are mentioning drivers later in the sentence |
| 148 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | <emphasis>Simple, consistent repository structure and build system</emphasis> - &os; uses a single repository for all of its components, both kernel and userspace. This, along with an unified and easy to customize build system and a well thought out development process makes it easy to integrate &os; with build infrastructure for your own product. |
| 174 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | /in extending/into extending/ |
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| 136 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | I'm not sure about this one. "Kernel API" can mean the API that the kernel provides to the userspace; "kernel driver API" makes it very obvious that it's about the API for stuff that runs inside the kernel. |
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Thank you for fixing up this document, it really needed it.
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| 136 ↗ | (On Diff #43958) | ok |