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Improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages
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rD52705: Improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages.
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This is a patch to improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages.

It includes how to list the prime (non automatic) packages, and how to mark a package as automatic or as non automatic.

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public_fzwte.net created this revision.Dec 10 2018, 10:53 AM
bcr added a subscriber: bcr.Dec 10 2018, 11:32 AM

A few suggestions. Overall, I like the text and the addition to the handbook.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
647

There should be a dash between "Non" and "automatic".

672

There is a sentence stop missing here.

677

This <screen> tag should be indented on the same level as the <para>'s above and below.

683

You could use emphasis tags here instead of capitalizing the "NOT" here.

public_fzwte.net updated this revision to Diff 51827.Dec 10 2018, 7:25 PM
public_fzwte.net updated this revision to Diff 51831.Dec 10 2018, 7:31 PM
public_fzwte.net marked 3 inline comments as done.
bcr added a comment.Dec 20 2018, 8:06 PM

OK, thanks for these fixes. Can you run textproc/igor over your changes and see if they report anything? If not, I can commit it.
Thanks.

debdrup added a subscriber: debdrup.Dec 20 2018, 9:12 PM

I had to double-check i.e vs. eg., and found that it scans, so it looks good to me.

ygy accepted this revision as: ygy.Dec 21 2018, 6:16 AM
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LGTM.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 21 2018, 6:16 AM
Closed by commit rD52705: Improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages. (authored by bcr). · Explain WhyDec 21 2018, 6:18 PM
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