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Authored by ziaee on Tue, May 12, 11:14 PM.

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FreeBSD hasn't fit on a CD-ROM in a long time,
and nobody we know of is selling FreeBSD DVDs.
This whole page needs TLC, one thing at a time.

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ziaee requested review of this revision.Tue, May 12, 11:14 PM
ziaee created this revision.
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B73062: Diff 177722.Tue, May 12, 11:14 PM
minsoochoo0122_proton.me added a subscriber: minsoochoo0122_proton.me.Wed, May 13, 12:25 AM
minsoochoo0122_proton.me added inline comments.
documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc
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Not an English expert, but do we need comma here?

cperciva added a subscriber: cperciva.Wed, May 13, 1:09 AM
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documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc
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I suspect @ziaee just kept the pre-existing comma.

I'm not sure about saying "cloud marketplaces" specifically though -- not all clouds have something called "marketplace", and in the case of AWS the images are available both via the Marketplace and without going through the Marketplace.

How about "FreeBSD is available to download and in most clouds, free of charge." ?

ziaee updated this revision to Diff 177725.Wed, May 13, 2:02 AM

use @cperciva's text, thank you!

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B73064: Diff 177725.Wed, May 13, 2:02 AM
carlavilla accepted this revision.Wed, May 13, 6:43 AM
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Good catch.
Btw, I am feeling old... I started with floppy disks and right now we're removing mentions to CD-ROM and DVD :'(

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Wed, May 13, 6:43 AM
ziaee added a comment.Wed, May 13, 12:00 PM
In D56981#1305443, @carlavilla wrote:

Good catch.
Btw, I am feeling old... I started with floppy disks and right now we're removing mentions to CD-ROM and DVD :'(

Me too ;-; Thanks for looking it over!

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