Differential D2876

Expand sysctls descriptions for iscsi(4) and ctl(4).
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Authored by trasz on Jun 20 2015, 9:28 AM.

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trasz updated this revision to Diff 6349.Jun 20 2015, 9:28 AM

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share/man/man4/ctl.4
96 ↗	(On Diff #6349)	This is a long sentence, and easily split to be simpler (and avoid pauses). Set to 0 to disable logging or 1 to warn about potential problems. Larger values enable debugging output.
101 ↗	(On Diff #6349)	Sorry, did not see this before. Contractions should be avoided. They can confuse non-native speakers or translators. s/it's/it is/
share/man/man4/iscsi.4
72 ↗	(On Diff #6349)	As above: Set to 0 to disable logging or 1 to warn about potential problems. Larger values enable debugging output.

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Works for me. Thank you!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jun 21 2015, 1:56 PM

Closed by commit rS284682: Expand sysctls descriptions for iscsi(4) and ctl(4). (authored by trasz). · Explain WhyJun 21 2015, 2:21 PM

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