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trasz retitled this revision from to Expand sysctls descriptions for iscsi(4) and ctl(4)..
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share/man/man4/ctl.4
96 ↗(On Diff #6349)

This is a long sentence, and easily split to be simpler (and avoid pauses).

Set to 0 to disable logging or 1 to warn about potential problems.
Larger values enable debugging output.

101 ↗(On Diff #6349)

Sorry, did not see this before. Contractions should be avoided. They can confuse non-native speakers or translators.
s/it's/it is/

share/man/man4/iscsi.4
72 ↗(On Diff #6349)

As above:

Set to 0 to disable logging or 1 to warn about potential problems.
Larger values enable debugging output.

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Works for me. Thank you!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jun 21 2015, 1:56 PM
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