geli(8): Add an example on how to use geli(8) with a file as encrypted storage
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The use of "you" is discouraged, see https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html.
I think it shortens the sentences a bit. I've marked some other minor mistakes. In general, I like the example and it's a great addition to the man page.
lib/geom/eli/geli.8 | ||
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1115 | maybe add an "automatically" to this sentence? | |
1128 | s/asking/asked/ (or requested) | |
1149 | /asks/ask/ | |
1151 | maybe shorten this sentence a bit: "... the boot process is stopped asking for the passphrase" or "...waiting for the passphrase input". |
lib/geom/eli/geli.8 | ||
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1127 | a "you" sneaked in here... ;-) "... when geli init is called." |
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1127 | Damn. :) I know have it removed. |
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No worries, good things take time. Speaking of time: the time ha come to commit it. ;-)
Thank you!