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Improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages

Authored by on Dec 10 2018, 10:53 AM.



This is a patch to improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages.

It includes how to list the prime (non automatic) packages, and how to mark a package as automatic or as non automatic.

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bcr added a subscriber: bcr.Dec 10 2018, 11:32 AM

A few suggestions. Overall, I like the text and the addition to the handbook.

647 ↗(On Diff #51807)

There should be a dash between "Non" and "automatic".

672 ↗(On Diff #51807)

There is a sentence stop missing here.

677 ↗(On Diff #51807)

This <screen> tag should be indented on the same level as the <para>'s above and below.

683 ↗(On Diff #51807)

You could use emphasis tags here instead of capitalizing the "NOT" here. marked 3 inline comments as done.
bcr added a comment.Dec 20 2018, 8:06 PM

OK, thanks for these fixes. Can you run textproc/igor over your changes and see if they report anything? If not, I can commit it.

I had to double-check i.e vs. eg., and found that it scans, so it looks good to me.

ygy accepted this revision as: ygy.Dec 21 2018, 6:16 AM
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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 21 2018, 6:16 AM
This revision was automatically updated to reflect the committed changes.