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This is a patch to improve the handbook section about leaf/automatic packages.

It includes how to list the prime (non automatic) packages, and how to mark a package as automatic or as non automatic.

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A few suggestions. Overall, I like the text and the addition to the handbook.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.xml
647 ↗(On Diff #51807)

There should be a dash between "Non" and "automatic".

672 ↗(On Diff #51807)

There is a sentence stop missing here.

677 ↗(On Diff #51807)

This <screen> tag should be indented on the same level as the <para>'s above and below.

683 ↗(On Diff #51807)

You could use emphasis tags here instead of capitalizing the "NOT" here.

public_fzwte.net marked 3 inline comments as done.

OK, thanks for these fixes. Can you run textproc/igor over your changes and see if they report anything? If not, I can commit it.
Thanks.

I had to double-check i.e vs. eg., and found that it scans, so it looks good to me.

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LGTM.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Dec 21 2018, 6:16 AM
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