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Authored by trasz on Jul 6 2018, 10:25 PM.

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rD51981: Improve the introduction chapter, to fix the overall structure

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Improve the introduction chapter. This improves the overall structure
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trasz created this revision.Jul 6 2018, 10:25 PM

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Harbormaster completed remote builds in B17893: Diff 44976.Jul 6 2018, 10:25 PM

(The diff is a bit large due to changed indentation, but it's mostly about moving the <sect2> a bit further down and shortening the introduction part.)

allanjude added reviewers: bcr, Doc Committers.Jul 7 2018, 1:41 AM

A small textual correction.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
143 ↗	(On Diff #44976)	s/behaviour/behavior/ We use American English in the documentation project.

s/behaviour/behavior/

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B17897: Diff 44988.Jul 7 2018, 10:33 AM

trasz marked an inline comment as done.Jul 7 2018, 10:33 AM

Looks good to me. Thank you for updating that section.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jul 7 2018, 11:09 AM

Closed by commit rD51981: Improve the introduction chapter, to fix the overall structure (authored by trasz). · Explain WhyJul 8 2018, 1:32 PM

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