Rewrite USB device mode chapter

[bcr]

Thank you for updating the handbook chapter with your work on USB device mode. I added some things I've found. Mostly minor things, easy to fix.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/usb-device-mode/chapter.xml

35

I would introduce the acronym OTG in parentheses here (right after "On the Go"), so that people that are reading on know what it stands for.

56

You don't need to break the line here prematurely (this is not a man page ;-)).

58

same here.

72

There must be an empty line here to separate the </para> from the new <para>.

121

s/the need special/the need for special/

123

Pull this line up into the one above.

145

The indentation seems off here. The <scree> needs to be on the same level as the <para>s above and below.

157

Make an empty line before <screen> appear here. ;-)

166

/as laptop/as a laptop/

168

the "pstat -t" would be better when wrapped in <command> tags. You can leave out the " then. Also, remove the "the" and "command" before and after it. You can rewrite it like this:

Use <command>pstat -t</command> on the host to list the terminal lines.

or

List terminal lines on the host using <command>pstat -t</command>

171

Another empty line here.

176

One more empty line at this position.

186

Another ... (you know what I mean). ;-)

196

And another...

201

s/as laptop/as a laptop/ (same as above)

202

s/open connection/open a connection/

203

s/Putty/<application>PuTTY</application>/

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s/Putty/<application>PuTTY</application>/

208

Same here for Putty.

277

I think it would make sense to wrap the cfumass into <filename> tags here, as the sentence is referencing the file/script directly.

281

And another empty line...

287

Time for an empty line...

[emaste]

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/usb-device-mode/chapter.xml

34

use of?

44

maybe we should add something like "or a combination thereof"?

51

probably drop "the usual host mode". client port implies it's not host mode.

73–75

too many clauses in this sentence

[trasz]

Fixes from bcr@ and emaste@.

[trasz]

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/usb-device-mode/chapter.xml

73–75

You're probably right, but I'm not sure how to split it.

[trasz]

Fix typo.

[bcr]

Looks good to me now, approved!