In preparation for replacing Fedora 10 with CentOS 6.6 as default Linux
userland, amend the handbook by s/f10/c6/ (and correcting one typo).
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| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 224 | Install <package role="port">www/nspluginwrapper</package> from the port. | |
| 225–226 | Not your fault, but this sentence is weird. It's not really that large a port. Is it large enough to make a difference to the user? Probably not, so I suggest ending the sentence after the package name. If "which is a large port" is kept, a comma is needed before it. | |
| 229–230 | Install <package role="port">ww/linux-c6-flashplugin11</package> from the port. | |
| 229–230 | I think the command needs to be updated because browser_plugins is not present on new systems. But I have not tested it. Either way, we should try to avoid line continuations. | |
| 230–232 | As above, I'm not sure this is the way to do it any more. If it is, this step should be mentioned before creating the link. | |
| 309–310 | Just mentioning the port name is enough: Then install <package role="port">www/opera-linuxplugins</package>. | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.xml | ||
| 130–131 | s/In order for/For/ | |
| 130–131 | s/the following/this/ | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 229–230 | This is handled by USES= webplugin:linux, normally automatically, from within a port: xmj@mx12:~/repos/linux-ports-cleantree/www/linux-c6-flashplugin11$ make -V WEBPLUGIN_DIR So, that step is actually superfluous. I'll remove it. | |
| 230–232 | Again, superfluous. Nice catch! | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 223 | Best to use <package role="port"> when explicitly referring to a port. | |
| 230–232 | <package role="port"> | |
| 309–310 | <package role="port"> | |
| 309–310 | The "...port, as a package is not available" can be misread. Break into two sentences: "... port. Licensing prevents making a package available." | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 8 | This is a whitespace-only change and should be done separately. | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 8 | The first actual change is on line 223, so I'm not sure what you mean. If it was different it would be marked red/green here in Phabric | |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml | ||
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| 8 | It was light green here, apparently a change in the underlying file. Never mind. | |