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  • Add @{pre,post}{,un}exec and deprecate @{,un}exec.
  • Update the way @sample works.
  • Move all the deprecated entries at the end.
  • Add the arguments section.
  • Switch the big "New Keywords" varlistentry into sect3s.
  • Update the @sample example to catch up with reality.

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mat retitled this revision from to Catch up with recent work in ports, and restructurate a bit..
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Note that this does a lot of things, each of which will have its own commit.

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This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Oct 1 2015, 11:18 AM
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml
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It's not clear what <quote>real</quote> means here. Maybe it should just be existing without the quote?

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s/file/filename/

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s/real/existing/

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s|installation/deinstallation|installation or deinstallation|

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s|installation/deinstallation|installation or deinstallation|

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<listitem> should be on its own line:

<listitem>
  <para><literal>attributes</literal></para>
</listitem>

(Also applies to following lines.)

803

This sentence is a little confusing. Maybe "If set to true, changes how arguments are handled, splitting %1 and %2 into multiple arguments."

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Break sentence: s/works, as/works. When/

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Break sentence: s/specified, for/specified. For/

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I think this can be "Custom Keyword Examples", with the final plural meaning multiple examples and multiple keywords.

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Split sentence: s/things, it/things. It/

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This revision now requires review to proceed.Oct 1 2015, 12:43 PM
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml
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This first usage of "actual" should explain what it means.

The <quote>actual</quote>, non-sample file...
802

Better, but still combines a lot of things into one sentence. Maybe:

Set to <literal>true</literal> to enable argument handling.
The whole <literal>%@</literal> line is split into numbered arguments,
<literal>%1</literal>, <literal>%2</literal>, and so on.  For example...
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"if enabled" is not needed, that is already the context for this paragraph.

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<quote> is not needed. here or in the rest of the paragraph. The <literal> shows the content. If the concern is that punctuation might be confused, maybe put the output into <programlisting> elements.

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I don't think the ", respectively" part is needed.

mat marked 5 inline comments as done.Oct 1 2015, 2:26 PM
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