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rD52257: Document USES=gl properly.
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Update documentation for newly added USES=gl

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zeising created this revision.Sep 10 2018, 8:12 PM
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Harbormaster completed remote builds in B19508: Diff 47894.Sep 10 2018, 8:12 PM
zeising updated this revision to Diff 47895.Sep 10 2018, 8:12 PM
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mat added a comment.Sep 10 2018, 8:31 PM

Could there be some description of each component?

zeising updated this revision to Diff 47923.Sep 11 2018, 6:54 PM

Update diff with a more verbose explanation.

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B19528: Diff 47923.Sep 11 2018, 6:54 PM
bcr added a comment.Sep 11 2018, 6:57 PM

Two nits that I found, the rest is fine from the doc side (can't say much about the actual content).

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml
704

s/depenency/dependency/

716

No </para> here.

zeising updated this revision to Diff 47924.Sep 11 2018, 7:02 PM

Fix spelling, remove some <para> that were in the wrong place, and add some missing words.

Now where did i put my coffee cup?

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B19529: Diff 47924.Sep 11 2018, 7:02 PM
zeising marked 2 inline comments as done.Sep 11 2018, 7:02 PM
bcr accepted this revision.Sep 11 2018, 7:25 PM

OK from the docs side.

mat added a comment.Sep 11 2018, 7:34 PM

This should probably be using a variablelist instead of a itemizedlist, see Example 9.12. variablelist Example.

zeising updated this revision to Diff 47942.Sep 12 2018, 5:59 AM

Update to use variablelist instead.

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B19535: Diff 47942.Sep 12 2018, 5:59 AM
mat accepted this revision.Sep 12 2018, 8:09 AM
mat added inline comments.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/uses/chapter.xml
704

The literals in all the terms should still be in <literal> tags.

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sep 12 2018, 8:09 AM
zeising updated this revision to Diff 47956.Sep 12 2018, 4:22 PM

Add literals

This revision now requires review to proceed.Sep 12 2018, 4:22 PM
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B19545: Diff 47956.Sep 12 2018, 4:22 PM
zeising marked an inline comment as done.Sep 12 2018, 4:22 PM
This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Sep 14 2018, 7:04 PM
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