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- rD45950: Add a bit about adding, moving and copying files for patches.
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml | ||
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94 | s/your/the/ (avoid using informal "you" and "your") | |
268 | "The move and copy will have to be run before" is clunky. Better is | |
270 | Same here: "<command>svn add</command> or <command>svn remove</command> must be run after the patch is applied." |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/upgrading/chapter.xml | ||
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271 | "Afterwards" is kind of colloquial. Generally, it would be "afterward". But I think it's better to say either "after applying the patch" or "after the patch is applied." |