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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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12–13 | <para>This section explains the most common things to consider when creating a port.</para> | |
44 | s/mostly/mostly be/ | |
69 | This one actually needs "should". It's a recommendation on when to create directories. | |
74 | s/has to be/is/ | |
222 | s/upstream/the upstream/ | |
250 | setting <varname>USE_LDCONFIG</varname> to a list of | |
252 | s/example/example,/ | |
254 | <filename>PREFIX/lib/bar</filename>, | |
320–321 | s/has to/must/ | |
323 | s/in to/into/ | |
327 | s/cannot not be/cannot be/ | |
374–376 | <varname>RESTRICTED</varname>, since the latter variable | |
500–501 | s/else/other/ | |
503 | s/Same/The same/ | |
668 | s/if port/if the port/ | |
882 | s/^/an / | |
948 | Break sentence at NLS. Also use <acronym> tags on NLS. | |
954 | s/on// | |
1005–1006 | In high complexity cases, more advanced techniques | |
1006 | may be needed, such as | |
1058–1059 | s/like/as/ | |
1335 | I think this is one where "should" is correct. | |
2043 | s/so that/for/ | |
2072–2073 | When set, add the selected JDK port to the build dependencies. | |
2079–2080 | When set, add the selected JDK port to the run dependencies. | |
2085–2086 | When set, add the selected JDK port to the extract dependencies. | |
2109–2110 | Should this have the single quotes? | |
2253–2255 | "forecited" is a word, but a rare one. "previously listed variables" is better. | |
2281 | s/is/are/ | |
2338 | s/use/uses/ | |
2370–2371 | s/the// | |
2371 | s/must/is/ | |
2572 | mygroup</literal> if the port needs different values. This | |
2573 | allows the user to override them easily.</para> | |
2576 | s/the/a/ | |
2715 | s/must make sure to/must/ | |
2965–2966 | Do not redefine these variables in the port. | |
3156 | s/entries using/entries for/ | |
3588 | s/default define/default, define/ | |
3596–3597 | s/version define/version, define/ | |
4360 | This is a recommendation: earlier, all ports scripts should use</para> | |
4403–4404 | s/have/have a/ | |
4403–4404 | s/If so that/If so, that/ | |
4488 | "Should" is a recommendation here, and correct. |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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1335 | I don't think so, if it has those files, they must be listed in the plist, and be installed in the directory below. Maybe i should have used "must" and not "have to" ? | |
2072–2073 | Should I add <acronym> around JDK too ? should I do this everywhere ? | |
2109–2110 | nope. |