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- rD45618: igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
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| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml | ||
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| 527 ↗ | (On Diff #1173) | the strings? |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml | ||
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| 527 ↗ | (On Diff #1173) | It's a little ambiguous. Maybe "any of these strings". Also, s/note/not/ |
| 528 ↗ | (On Diff #1173) | "should be" is okay here, it is making a recommendation. But this sentence is vague. It's hard to tell what it is saying. The string should be different... from what? I think it is saying that the wording of the message depends on which variable is used. The example shows that BROKEN and IGNORE are worded differently. |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml | ||
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| 38 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | The <filename>pkg-<replaceable>*</replaceable></filename> files can be modified by <link linkend="pkg-names">redefining a variable</link> rather than overwriting the file. |
| 67 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Some code needs modifications or |
| 192 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | The rest of the sentence starting with "and" seems unnecessary here. Also, if we must include smileys, they should probably be ☺. |
| 220 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/resaonnable/reasonable/ |
| 221 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/,// |
| 284 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Break sentence at semicolon. |
| 311 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/System/The system/ |
| 347 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Do send applicable changes and patches to the upstream |
| 348 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | maintainer for inclusion in the next release of the code. |
| 349 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | This makes the next release that much easier. |
| 380 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/cases/cases,/ |
| 381 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | There are several variables that can be used in a port's <filename>Makefile</filename> to tell the user that the port cannot be installed. |
| 384 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | <command>make</command> is not really needed here. |
| 385 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/given back/shown/ |
| 386 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Remove <command>make</command>. |
| 387 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | variable. Each variable conveys radically different |
| 388 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | meanings, both to users and to automated systems that depend on |
| 389 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | "the" is not needed here. |
| 524 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | "it will be checked" is ambiguous. If this variable is set, <filename>/usr/lib32</filename> must be present for IA32 versions of libraries and the kernel must support IA32 compatibility. |
| 538 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Due to the way the information is shown to the user, the wording of messages for each variable differ:</para> |
| 637 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/Check/Verify/ |
| 650 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/Maybe also contact/Contact/ |
| 658 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Break sentence after "information". |
| 661 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | The quotes seem unnecessary. to get the executable name. |
| 663 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | s/behaviour/behavior/ |
| 709 ↗ | (On Diff #1250) | Break sentence after "way". |
| en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/porting-dads/chapter.xml | ||
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| 219 ↗ | (On Diff #1552) | Spelling: s/reasonnable/reasonable/ |