draft for suspend/resume submission

[salvadore]

Summary

Initial draft based on email.

Reported by: obiwac <[e-mail]>

[emaste]

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/suspend.adoc

2

I expect we'll have a Hibernate report as well. There is certainly some relationship between them but it probably makes sense to keep them separate since they have different scope, developers, WIP links, etc.

9

I think you're currently targeting the AMD framework 13? This will be our initial/primary target for the supported laptop list and it's fine if we're specific about that here @obiwac_gmail.com if you're so inclined.

It could be a parenthetical comment e.g. one modern laptop (Framework 13 AMD Ryzen 7040 series) by end of or just on the Framework 13 AMD Ryzen 7040 series.

[obiwac_gmail.com]

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/suspend.adoc

9

Sure, I don't have permission to edit this revision it would seem, but I like the second option (less words :)).

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

updated after review

[salvadore]

Approved, thanks! Only two minor nits that we can fix on commit if you prefer.

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/suspend.adoc

6

Please do not use contractions

20

Please remove final empty line

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

updating with additional feedback

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

misread newline comment

[pauamma_gundo.com]

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/suspend.adoc

3

Here I'd add contact email addresses as appropriate, and I'd move the 2 links here from the end for consistency with other reports.

9

I think this reads better, but I'll defer to a native speaker.

10

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

updating after feedback

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

Thanks for the feedback! Updated to include suggested changes.

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

fixed top link syntax

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

doceng report for 2024Q4 status report

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

I screwed up this revision. Apologies.
I will refile - I'm clearly not the best at using arc...

[freebsd_ny-central.org]

restoring review

[salvadore]

Merged, thanks! But I had a typo in the commit message so I need to close this review manually.