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14.0 relnotes: markup and wording fixes from Graham Perrin
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Authored by karels on Oct 19 2023, 6:02 PM.

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karels requested review of this revision.Oct 19 2023, 6:02 PM

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Harbormaster completed remote builds in B54098: Diff 129123.Oct 19 2023, 6:03 PM

grahamperrin added a subscriber: grahamperrin.Oct 19 2023, 10:55 PM

Thanks!

@karels, nice catch with the audible parts of "a -i option". I made the same mistake with something a few months ago.

website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc
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667–669	In these two sentences, I'm not sure about this: Support … will remain/be supported If someone asked me, "Graham, are you supporting the support for x?", I'd think it peculiar.
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grahamperrin added inline comments.Oct 19 2023, 11:34 PM

website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc
682	Sorry, comma in the wrong place. I meant: Use FreeBSD {releaseCurrent} and following releases, or the stable/14 branch, to migrate off 32-bit platforms.

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