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Light copyedit of draft 13.2 relnotes.
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Authored by pauamma_gundo.com on Feb 14 2023, 11:00 PM.
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R9:20e74b2690a9: Light copyedit of draft 13.2 relnotes
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Discussed with delphij, plus some I noticed later.

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pauamma_gundo.com requested review of this revision.Feb 14 2023, 11:00 PM
pauamma_gundo.com created this revision.
Harbormaster completed remote builds in B49790: Diff 117266.Feb 14 2023, 11:00 PM
delphij accepted this revision.Feb 14 2023, 11:02 PM

LGTM, thanks!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Feb 14 2023, 11:02 PM
karels accepted this revision.Feb 14 2023, 11:11 PM

LGTM too. I fixed some of these in my copy, will sync up.

karels added a comment.Feb 14 2023, 11:28 PM

btw, @carlavilla suggested using [.filename]#name#; I have already done that in my copy. so no need to do it in this commit.

pauamma_gundo.com added a comment.Feb 15 2023, 1:03 AM

Over to @carlavilla and or @gjb for mentor approval.

carlavilla accepted this revision.Feb 15 2023, 7:55 AM
ceri added a subscriber: ceri.Feb 15 2023, 4:12 PM
ceri added inline comments.
website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
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Can we drop this “a” please?

karels added inline comments.Feb 15 2023, 4:54 PM
website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
118

I agree, but I already have that change in my copy. If it doesn't go in this revision, it will go in the next. (I am waiting for input from several people, but hope to start a review today if this one has been committed.)

pauamma_gundo.com added inline comments.Feb 15 2023, 5:04 PM
website/content/en/releases/13.2R/relnotes.adoc
118

I'll commit as-is in the interest of overall timeliness. (Good catch.)

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