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Authored by allanjude on Mar 18 2015, 8:38 PM.

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allanjude retitled this revision from to Update handbook to remove references to obsolete rc.conf variable.
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
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s/by using/in/

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s/bit/bits/

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<para> should be on a new line after <listitem>

Terms need to be in <literal></literal>.

Do we have other places that use this term, space, dash, space, sentence format? This might work better with a <variablelist>, although I don't know about using <literal> for the term.

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s/a list of/the/

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Simplify:

key lengths that are supported by each encryption algorithm.

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"The size of the sectors used for encryption." does not really help. A reader could take that to mean something to do with the encryption algorithm or number of passes instead of the amount of data to encrypt at a time.

s/as/at/

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</listitem> on a new line.

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s/encryption/an encrypted swap device/

Updated with feedback from wblock

removed reference to 'onetime' section of geli manpage, because only the options listed in the variablelist are used by mount

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
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I still think that just "encryption" here is too vague. The example shows how to configure an an encrypted swap device, not just encryption in general.

Be more specific about what is being encrypted

bcr edited edge metadata.
This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Mar 22 2015, 6:59 PM