Update the GELI description to be more accurate
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Authored by allanjude on Jun 17 2018, 3:30 PM.

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rD54328: Update the GELI handbook to be more accurate

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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=208578
Submitted By: Wout Decre <wout@canodus.be> (original version)

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allanjude created this revision.Jun 17 2018, 3:30 PM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B17373: Diff 43946.Jun 17 2018, 3:30 PM

allanjude edited the summary of this revision. (Show Details)Jun 17 2018, 3:32 PM

Suggestion to split a sentence in two to avoid a colloquial "so".

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
2827 ↗	(On Diff #43946)	I would remove the "so" and split it up into two sentences: "This key can never be changed!" and "Rather than using it directly, it is encrypted with one or more user keys."

oshogbo accepted this revision.Jun 18 2018, 7:55 AM

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jun 18 2018, 7:55 AM

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