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Authored by sevan on Jul 7 2017, 1:41 AM.

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sevan created this revision.Jul 7 2017, 1:41 AM
bcr edited edge metadata.Jul 7 2017, 6:53 AM

A small suggestion on the original text...

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
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This
&os;   11
with the spaces before and after the   defeats the purpose of keeping the version number close to the word "FreeBSD" in case there is a line break. I know it was there before your change, but we might as well fix it while we're here: &os; 11

Your actual change looks fine to me.

sevan updated this revision to Diff 30540.Jul 7 2017, 4:01 PM

Drop the spaces between the macros.

sevan marked an inline comment as done.Jul 7 2017, 4:01 PM
wblock added inline comments.Jul 7 2017, 4:09 PM
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml
2131 ↗(On Diff #30540)

Telling the reader that this is for earlier versions first seems important:

For previous versions of &os;, add these options to a custom kernel configuration file and rebuild the kernel as shown in <xref
sevan updated this revision to Diff 30541.Jul 7 2017, 4:54 PM

Re-edit based on feedback.

wblock accepted this revision.Jul 7 2017, 5:09 PM
This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Jul 7 2017, 5:09 PM
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