This diff will add the third section in the chapter, "Launching Your First WINE Program."
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Can you provide the image file as well?
It's a good starting text. A sweep through it for the use of "you" would be good.
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| 3 | You can use &os; as a placeholder for "FreeBSD". Also, I think the 's is not needed here. | |
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Minor nit. We can also run over the document with a search & replace later and look for "FreeBSD" and replace it with "&os;".
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| 3 | It still says "FreeBSD" instead of &os; | |
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Final revisions (fixing lots of jacked-up DocBook indentation, plus a couple of instances of "you," and other style-related updates).
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Looks good now, I can fix some of the indentation when the whole chapter gets committed.
This file is complete as it is now. Thank you!
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Hello, apologies, I'm just seeing this.
Yes, I concur that this was committed. Please let me know if there's anything I need to do on my end.