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Authored by carlavilla on Mar 12 2020, 8:15 PM.
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Update the allocation disk section

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Compile the handbook

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Looking good in general, just replaced a few will-future with simple present.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml
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s/will show/displays/

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s/will show/shows/

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s/in/is available in/

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I'd just say "drives" instead of "hard drive(s)", which also includes SSDs and NVMe.

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s/will exit/exits/
s/hard drive/drive/

Thank you, commit approved!

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Mar 12 2020, 9:19 PM
This revision was automatically updated to reflect the committed changes.