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mat updated this revision to Diff 1168.Aug 20 2014, 3:04 PM

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/keeping-up/chapter.xml
43	"Get" is nonspecific, "receive" is a little better.
44	s/his/their/ seems a bit better.
72	"too high volume" is clunky. How about If the volume of messages on this mailing list is too high, consider
73	which contains only announcements.</para>

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