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- rD45713: Document BUNDLE_LIBS.
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Two corrections from me.
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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229 ↗ | (On Diff #1872) | Either use architecture (singular) or architectures, but then you have to remove the a from the sentence. I'd use the singular... |
235 ↗ | (On Diff #1872) | Remove the "the", it sounds better. I think igor will also discourage the use of excessive "the", when they are not required. |
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/special/chapter.xml | ||
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235 ↗ | (On Diff #1872) | I started without the "the" but it sounded weird : "Always ask Ports Management Team <portmgr@FreeBSD.org>" |
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You were right about the &a.portmgr; entity. I didn't remember that it will be expanded that way, I thought it would just be "Portmanager". Let's leave it that way. The other change is fine now, so you can go ahead and commit.