Second round of @dirrm* cleanup.

[mat]

Test Plan

make

[bcr]

Some fixes for bugs I've found.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml

96

the comma is obsolete here.

101

same here, remove the comma.

109

and from here as well...

249

you guessed it, comma-be-gone. :-)

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml

196

difficult.

207

I would remove the "then" here, it makes the sentence more difficult to read.

[mat]

Remove superfluous commas, split a long sentence.

[bcr]

When you've fixed the "difficult", then I'm fine with it.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml

196

difficult

[mat]

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml

196

Any help would be nice :-)

[bcr]

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml

196

Sorry, I thought it was clear.
There is no word "difficule" in english. You probably meant to write "difficult" instead.

[mat]

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml

196

Ah, yes, I thought the problem was that the paragraph was difficult to read 0:-)

[mat]

Closed by commit rD45707 (authored by @mat).