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mat retitled this revision from to Second round of @dirrm* cleanup..
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Some fixes for bugs I've found.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/plist/chapter.xml
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the comma is obsolete here.

101 ↗(On Diff #1859)

same here, remove the comma.

109 ↗(On Diff #1859)

and from here as well...

249 ↗(On Diff #1859)

you guessed it, comma-be-gone. :-)

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
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difficult.

207 ↗(On Diff #1859)

I would remove the "then" here, it makes the sentence more difficult to read.

Remove superfluous commas, split a long sentence.

When you've fixed the "difficult", then I'm fine with it.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
196 ↗(On Diff #1860)

difficult

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
196 ↗(On Diff #1860)

Any help would be nice :-)

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
196 ↗(On Diff #1860)

Sorry, I thought it was clear.
There is no word "difficule" in english. You probably meant to write "difficult" instead.

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
196 ↗(On Diff #1860)

Ah, yes, I thought the problem was that the paragraph was difficult to read 0:-)

mat updated this revision to Diff 1862.

Closed by commit rD45707 (authored by @mat).