Replace passive voice with active voice and other tweaks.
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Authored by jhb on Dec 15 2016, 9:12 PM.

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rS310424: Replace passive voice with active voice and other tweaks.

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Replace passive voice with active voice and other tweaks.

Drop uses of 'will'.
Replace 'to use' with active voice.
Tidy language around interrupt types and clarify that INTx doesn't work on VFs.
Drop leading articles from sysctl/tunable descriptions.
Tweak the wording of several sysctl/tunable descriptions.

Submitted by: wblock (1, 2, 4)

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jhb updated this revision to Diff 22964.Dec 15 2016, 9:12 PM

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Found one small addition, which does not diminish the the overall awesomeness of this diff!

share/man/man4/cxgbev.4
234 ↗	(On Diff #22964)	s/will fail/fail/

Drop two more instances of 'will'.

jhb marked an inline comment as done.Dec 16 2016, 8:32 PM

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share/man/man4/cxgbev.4
234 ↗	(On Diff #22964)	Fixed this and one other existing one.

Closed by commit rS310424: Replace passive voice with active voice and other tweaks. (authored by jhb). · Explain WhyDec 22 2016, 6:05 PM

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