[versions] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
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mat updated this revision to Diff 1183.Aug 20 2014, 3:09 PM

mat retitled this revision from to [versions] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml
1098 ↗	(On Diff #1227)	Using "should" as a recommendation is okay. But here it could be imperative: <entry><sys/dkstat.h> is empty. Do not include it.</entry>
2503 ↗	(On Diff #1227)	"Use struct ipmregn instead."
3519 ↗	(On Diff #1227)	This depends on what the code actually does. There are small differences: "should" is a recommendation. "can" means it is optional. "can" is probably okay, but implies that the counting might not be skipped.
4718 ↗	(On Diff #1227)	Nice!

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