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[versions] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
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Authored by mat on Aug 20 2014, 3:09 PM.

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mat retitled this revision from to [versions] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/versions/chapter.xml
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Using "should" as a recommendation is okay. But here it could be imperative:

<entry>&lt;sys/dkstat.h&gt; is empty. Do not include it.</entry>

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"Use struct ipmregn instead."

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This depends on what the code actually does. There are small differences:

"should" is a recommendation.
"can" means it is optional.

"can" is probably okay, but implies that the counting might not be skipped.

4718 ↗(On Diff #1227)

Nice!

With wblock's comments

mat updated this revision to Diff 1326.

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