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mat updated this revision to Diff 1176.Aug 20 2014, 3:07 PM
mat retitled this revision from to [quick-porting] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..
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mat added reviewers: portmgr, Doc Committers.Aug 20 2014, 3:12 PM
mat updated this revision to Diff 1220.Aug 22 2014, 4:53 PM

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
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"the" is needed here.

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Here, "youremail" seems less ambiguous.

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"the" is needed here.

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Break sentence at semicolon.

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Break aside into a second sentence:
are in an awkward format. For example, manpages have justified spacing, which looks particularly bad with monospaced fonts.

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"must" is probably better than "has to".

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This paragraph should probably be checked to see if the field names agree with Bugzilla.

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s/put it in/commit it to/

mat updated this revision to Diff 1419.Sep 9 2014, 3:19 PM

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
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Extra "add" at the end of the line.

mat closed this revision.Sep 10 2014, 1:14 PM
mat updated this revision to Diff 1443.

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