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[quick-porting] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.

Authored by mat on Aug 20 2014, 3:07 PM.

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"the" is needed here.

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Here, "youremail" seems less ambiguous.

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"the" is needed here.

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Break sentence at semicolon.

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Break aside into a second sentence:
are in an awkward format. For example, manpages have justified spacing, which looks particularly bad with monospaced fonts.

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"must" is probably better than "has to".

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This paragraph should probably be checked to see if the field names agree with Bugzilla.

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s/put it in/commit it to/

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Extra "add" at the end of the line.

mat updated this revision to Diff 1443.

Closed by commit rD45586 (authored by @mat).