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mat retitled this revision from to [quick-porting] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
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"the" is needed here.

55 ↗(On Diff #1220)

Here, "youremail" seems less ambiguous.

98 ↗(On Diff #1220)

"the" is needed here.

99 ↗(On Diff #1220)

Break sentence at semicolon.

101 ↗(On Diff #1220)

Break aside into a second sentence:
are in an awkward format. For example, manpages have justified spacing, which looks particularly bad with monospaced fonts.

119 ↗(On Diff #1220)

"must" is probably better than "has to".

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This paragraph should probably be checked to see if the field names agree with Bugzilla.

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s/put it in/commit it to/

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
368 ↗(On Diff #1419)

Extra "add" at the end of the line.

mat updated this revision to Diff 1443.

Closed by commit rD45586 (authored by @mat).