[quick-porting] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
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Authored by mat on Aug 20 2014, 3:07 PM.

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rD45586: igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.

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mat updated this revision to Diff 1176.Aug 20 2014, 3:07 PM

mat retitled this revision from to [quick-porting] igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes..

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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
31 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	"the" is needed here.
55 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	Here, "youremail" seems less ambiguous.
98 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	"the" is needed here.
99 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	Break sentence at semicolon.
101 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	Break aside into a second sentence: are in an awkward format. For example, manpages have justified spacing, which looks particularly bad with monospaced fonts.
119 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	"must" is probably better than "has to".
366 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	This paragraph should probably be checked to see if the field names agree with Bugzilla.
391 ↗	(On Diff #1220)	s/put it in/commit it to/

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wblock added inline comments.Sep 9 2014, 7:08 PM

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/quick-porting/chapter.xml
368 ↗	(On Diff #1419)	Extra "add" at the end of the line.

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