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- rD45579: igor -Ry and some other rewording and fixes.
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/chapter.xml | ||
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15 | "the" is needed here. | |
16 | "files" is needed here. It's not necessarily clear from context whether it is talking about files or variables. | |
21 | To display a message when the package is installed, | |
45 | This could be more imperative: Do not add an entry for <filename>pkg-message</filename> in <filename>pkg-plist</filename>. | |
55 | <command>pkg install</command>, use | |
56 | automatically be added to the package. It will be run twice by | |
57 | <command>pkg</command>, the first time as <literal>${SH} | |
59 | s/installed/installed,/ | |
93–94 | s/need be/needed/ | |
96 | "files" is needed here. | |
96 | among several ports or when it is necessary to write to one of these files | |
99 | the directory containing the <filename>pkg-<replaceable>*</replaceable></filename> files). | |
158 | "the" is needed here. | |
174 | s/pair/pair,/ | |
175 | s/get/be/ | |
185 | Passive to active: s/will replace/replaces/ |